simplify dialog to use a bit more straightforward vocabulary and sentance structure #166
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0fad1dd.Rewrote every spoken line: the nine prologue lines and all twenty quest brief/done pairs. Mostly splitting the em-dash subclauses into separate sentences and dropping the more literary vocabulary - "hulls" -> "ships", "the banded worlds" -> "the striped worlds", "That is our hands back" -> "That frees us for other work". Same meaning and same voice, shorter sentences.